I would BUY this! That's a big deal! You made yourself a fine song here! I agree with Zelazon though, a little drive and reverb on the voice would really fill it out. Good job!
I would BUY this! That's a big deal! You made yourself a fine song here! I agree with Zelazon though, a little drive and reverb on the voice would really fill it out. Good job!
If so check out aaronmusslewhite.bandcamp.com it's available for $name your own price. Thanks, there is reverb and delay but it's probably blending in with the track you can hear it better when the pad drops out in the 2nd verse. I'll be sure to be less sparin in future. :P and thanks again glad you liked it. :D
WOO! Great ambient sounds! Cool bass in the D&B shift, too. Drums were nonsense though... And you need to cut off the silence tailing the song...
drums were nonsense?
Love the progressions and rhythems! Good stuff mate! However, as good as the song was, I can't help but feel that something was... off... with the mix. A wee bit too compressed maybe...
I sidechained the main growl to most instruments so it stood out, but was there not enough mids ? It was mixed in headphones but mastered on speakers, I think I know what you mean, thanks for the review
EDIT: updated the track so hopefully it sounds a better now, thanks for the help
Love it! Especially the TF2 sounds... I'm not even normally a big fan of hip-hop but this is fantastic!
I feel like I could master this for you (I'd be honored, in fact); if you're interested just message me or reply...
Sure, go ahead.
I'm sleepy now... I love the sound clip. Where's it from?
It's taken from the documentary 'Cosmos' by Carl Sagan, from this part specifically:
The sounds were fantastic! The plucky arp and the bubbly thing-a-ma-jig you started it off with had me completely ensnared. However, it never really changed up...
So;
Strong points: 1. sound design/atmosphere 2.harmony/chord structure
Things I'd work on: 1. repetition 2.Melody
I have the same problems with many of my songs and I'm working on it too ;)
Keep it up though! That stuff is DOPE!
Thank you very much for the constructive review!
I will definitely shorten this song up a bit, this did get too repetitive, and I will probably get around variating away from the same 4 melodies that were similar I used throught out the song.
Thanks again for your ideas!
-G21508
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